Year 12 HSC English Advanced student looking for an experienced tutor to help substantially refine and rework my essay drafts before the HSC. I’m mainly looking for detailed feedback on argument, analysis, structure, expression and how well each paragraph answers the question, rather than general tutoring. I already have full drafts and would like fairly intensive editing and guidance to bring them to a stronger final standard. Experience with HSC English Advanced and HSC marking would be ideal. I’m happy to pay above the usual hourly rate if the level of feedback/editing requires additional time. Online tutoring is completely fine.